My Athletics Highlight

“OMG! I got a three!” There I was in the discus  part of athletics. I had just walked over to the grey concrete circle and had swiftly thrown the round, black discus and boom! I just got a tremendous, unexpected three! It was like the discus was being softly jet-propelled. Everyone was just like; “Well done Zach!”  I was just so extremely proud of myself.
By Zach Brown

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